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Would you please correct my English?
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I touch my electronic commuter pass on the automatic ticket examiner when I go through the wicket.
I go up the long stairs to the plat home without using an elevator to my health.
I arrive the plat home a few minutes before the train come to the station.
We can’t smoke in the station ground at all.
There are three plat homes in the station.
I always get on the train that starts from the station so that I can regularly have a seat.
I always sit down the end of the seat not to be caught in by passengers on both sides.
My train is a down so that it is not comparatively crowded.
I usually write in my diary or read a book without looking around restlessly in the train.
The train gradually is going to be crowded.
plat home>platform lol
First sentence is fine.
Instead of using the elevator, I go up the long stairs to the platform. This is better for my health.
I arrive and wait at the platform a few minutes before the train arrives at the station.
It is forbidden to smoke on station grounds.
There are three platforms at the station I go to.
Not sure about the next one, sorry.
I don't like having passengers on either side of me, so I sit on the end seat.
My train is not very crowded because it is a down.
I usually write in my diary or read a book on the train, this keeps me busy so I am not restless.
After a while sitting on the train, it gradually becomes more crowded.
Hope I helped!
